Bang! Creative!
Really. I wouldn't have ever figured to use a rant for the vocals for a peice of music. This is pretty sweet, since not only does it all meld well together, but the backing track for the music sounds quite substantial, like it can all hold together.
The first three quarters of this song sound good, including all of the parts it sums up to. The guitar tone and track itself aren't anything too advanced, fairly simple. Although, there's that peculiar phaser effect for the lead that makes things a bit interesting.
The intro was really sludgingly slow though. It almost turned me away until I noticed that this submission was a full solid 6 minutes.
Well... Progression is fair and all, the rant and all was a creative, interesting idea. It doesn't exactly sound very music-oriented to follow an exact tempo, but it reminds me of something that the Talking Heads have done in the past.
It's really a rant that I've heard before, but again, put a rythm track to it, cool.
Wait, drums... Drums... They're simple too, but drums are supposed to be, no? I do beleive that they're a program, but everyone else uses them.
I need to admit though, Grayz is correct, make the power of the vocals and the intruments more consistent, that is all.